tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8677941077759110922.post6819325504736687013..comments2024-03-27T12:38:50.758+05:30Comments on एहसास अंतर्मन के: अरमान-(आशु रचना )मुदिताhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14625528186795380789noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8677941077759110922.post-58909632549858382442010-07-31T09:36:05.545+05:302010-07-31T09:36:05.545+05:30बहुत दिनों बाद इतनी बढ़िया कविता पड़ने को मिली.... ...बहुत दिनों बाद इतनी बढ़िया कविता पड़ने को मिली.... गजब का लिखा हैसंजय भास्कर https://www.blogger.com/profile/08195795661130888170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8677941077759110922.post-45224272752894756112010-07-30T12:04:03.218+05:302010-07-30T12:04:03.218+05:30bahut khub...
sach mein mann baar baar yahi keh ut...bahut khub...<br />sach mein mann baar baar yahi keh uthta hai..<br />aao na...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8677941077759110922.post-76652716728095124682010-07-29T10:33:26.432+05:302010-07-29T10:33:26.432+05:30rajendra ji avem deepak ji bahut shukriya....
Avi...rajendra ji avem deepak ji bahut shukriya....<br /><br />Avinash.. kya ittifaak hai ki wo "AAO naa !!" bhi maine pankhon ki rachna par hi likha tha... wahan waqt ke pankh the yahan armaano ke.. lagta hai pankhon ka astitva gehra juda hai is "AAo na" se :)मुदिताhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14625528186795380789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8677941077759110922.post-55168917406758905362010-07-29T10:23:20.872+05:302010-07-29T10:23:20.872+05:30Di!
Mujhe bhi yaad tha... bahut apna sa aur bahut...Di!<br /><br />Mujhe bhi yaad tha... bahut apna sa aur bahut andar tak ka lagta hai ye aao na!<br /><br />bahut balwan hai... :)Avinash Chandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01556980533767425818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8677941077759110922.post-27535697172805445032010-07-29T06:36:40.639+05:302010-07-29T06:36:40.639+05:30Hi..
Duniya main gar vikat hai kuchh to,
wo hai v...Hi..<br /><br />Duniya main gar vikat hai kuchh to,<br />wo hai virah vyatha ka dansh..<br />Hruday tutkar bikhra rahta..<br />Bheege armanon ke pankh..<br />Priyatam jab mil jaata hai tab..<br />Man spandan se bhar jaaye..<br />Khushiyon ki jo dhup khile jo..<br />Man ka panchi ud jaaye..<br /><br />Sundar bhavabhivyakti..<br /><br />Deepak..Deepak Shuklahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02437731202200979518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8677941077759110922.post-11287209160297214672010-07-28T23:59:52.886+05:302010-07-28T23:59:52.886+05:30अच्छा सृजन...!!! ,,कुछ पंक्तिया बहुत कुछ कहती हुई ...अच्छा सृजन...!!! ,,कुछ पंक्तिया बहुत कुछ कहती हुई ,,,!!! ,,,,इस सुन्दर रचना के लिए बधाई और आभार ...शब्दों के इस सुहाने सफ़र में आज से हम भी आपके साथ है ,,,चलो साथ मिलकर चलते है ,,,शायद सफ़र कुछ आसान हो जाए ...?Rahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08726389437723424230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8677941077759110922.post-59075699984088763272010-07-28T23:58:41.953+05:302010-07-28T23:58:41.953+05:30इस टिप्पणी को लेखक द्वारा हटा दिया गया है.Rahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08726389437723424230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8677941077759110922.post-23997709888416703362010-07-28T22:57:27.420+05:302010-07-28T22:57:27.420+05:30avinash... pehle bhi ek rachna mein likha tha tab ...avinash... pehle bhi ek rachna mein likha tha tab tumne yahi kaha tha.. aur aaj likhte huye dhyaan tha ki is aao naa!! mein bada asar hai :)मुदिताhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14625528186795380789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8677941077759110922.post-3500898102579439202010-07-28T22:55:21.532+05:302010-07-28T22:55:21.532+05:30आओ ना!
इतना अच्छा है, बहुत अच्छा..आओ ना!<br /><br />इतना अच्छा है, बहुत अच्छा..Avinash Chandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01556980533767425818noreply@blogger.com